Evaluative Commentary

R: We are group U1-47 and chose Kyle Rapps 'Hard Knock Children" to produce three products: a music video for the song, a digipak for the album and a magazine advert for the products.

Q1

L: After researching into similar music videos with the same genre we found that lots of video had a relationship between the lyrics and the visuals. For example the line "If I had to go to a bank.." we showed the artist at Lloyd's TSB bank door. The audience would instantly recognise this as a bank and understand the link we were trying to show. From the research we found this relationship was common in rap videos and that the audience would be expecting this to happen throughout the video.

S: Music and visual relationships were very important in similar videos as well and we felt it necessary to fit the shot changes of our video to a beat or sound effect in the music. This added a great amount of fluidity to the video and constantly engages the audience.

C: Also in our research we found that the urban locations were regularly used in rap and hip-hop videos. We made sure that we chose suitable locations that the audience would recognise to be urban and from the genre. With this in mind we used street corners, a basketball court, a skate park and a deserted car park and we felt it communicated the genre well.

Q2

L: The reason why our products are so strong and work so well together is because we used a constant theme between all of them. The colours of the basketball which were red, white and blue were very strong and vivid therefore we used them to make the products stand out. We also used the iconic basketball and red basketball jersey as another theme to help link further link the products together.

R: The concept we were trying to communicate came from the song name 'Hard Knock Children'. The concept was school and what 'hard knock' children do after school. For example: hang out by the basketball court, skate spark or just hanging around the streets.

C:  We tried to create an image of someone who is laid back, cool and dislikes any form of social control (e.g. school) like most rappers.

S: Most males from the age of 13-18 (teenagers) dislike school and like hip hop/ rap music. So this is our choice of target audience. The image of the artist, the song, and the three products will definitely attract attention from teenage males because Kyle Rapps is the kind of person they aspire to be, because he's cool.

Q3

L: We feel that our initial pitch hasn't changed that much when looking at our final products. However the changes that we did make were down to the feedback we received from peers and teachers.

R: Our initial pitch was to shoot at typical urban areas where school boys hang out. we were going to film some shots with the artist walking and rapping towards the camera which our peers liked the idea of. We were told by our peers to make sure we added enough cut-aways to make our video more engaging and not too boring. We hadn't thought so much about this so it was a very helpful comment. The audience also approved of our themes of basketball and locations but they felt it might be appropriate to find a new, different urban location to add an extra dimension to the video.

C: After taking on board all feedback at the pitch we filmed our product and created a rough cut of all the footage. This then led to more feedback from peers and teachers. Many thought that it was very much like they imagined it to be from the pitch we did, however we did receive some constructive criticism to work on. They felt that the second artist's performance was not as convincing or as well lip synced as the first artists performance. There were also comments about the locations we used and they felt that another one was important to add variety to the video. Finally it was brought up that we could use more cutaways to break up the lip syncing in the song. We took this all on board and made sure that in our second shoot we adhered to the feedback we received.

S: Before we uploaded the product we had one final lot of feedback. It was suggested to add effects and colour filters to the shots to create a more professional piece of work and to make it look less like footage just put together with a track over the top.

R: We defiantly feel tat the feedback received throughout the project improved our video greatly. It allowed our idea to progress into a quality video that suited the genre and target audience well. We have to remember that some of the feedback was coming directly from our target audience so it was vital to take it into consideration.

Q4

L: One of the most important parts to the success of our products was the research and planning we did. The Internet allowed us to gather all the information from professional products we needed to create our own. We used a wide variety of media technologies throughout the creation of our music video. For example: The HD camera we used for filming was simple to work with and provided us with excellent picture quality.

S: We used a tripod for the video camera to make sure the shots were steady - if we had not done, we might have risked the music video looking poor and unprofessional.

R: Final Cut was the program we used to bring all of our footage together and to edit each shot into place. The program allowed us to edit with mili-seconds of the lyrics, and it was easy to swap and change shots if we wanted. We worked in layers with out shots, so that each synced piece of footage ran under each other simultaneously, meaning we could choose which piece of footage worked best for a certain part of the song.

C: We were also able to add colour filters and colour corrector to create a greater urban effect. Which was recommended by feedback we collected, and it definitely did enhance our product.

S: We used Photoshop to create our ancillary products which was software we were all pretty unfamiliar with. The effects we discovered and used were 3D effects to the objects and we brightened up the colours in our photos to create a more clear image. The photos instantly became more appealing and noticeable.

R: Blogger was very important throughout our project as it allowed the whole group to constantly update and plan the work ahead. We could conduct research, post it on the blog, and everyone else in the group could read it and use this research to help with the construction of ideas.

C: I don't think the technology ever got in the way of our creativity. Because even though we were uploading everything through word document-style blog posts, if we wanted to draw something, we could just use the still camera's to take a picture of the drawing, and then upload it onto the computer.